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To My Love

To dream with you under the Moon and the stars.... and in the morning when the Sun comes up I will wake up in your arms. I will look into your eyes, you will smile then, I will tell you just how much I love you my love for you is forever, maybe you will also love me for all eternity You are like soft music to me let's dance on the clouds fly all through the night on the wings of music and the stars

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Date: 5/16/2016 10:25:00 PM
Alice, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 2:49:00 PM
ALICE, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 7/11/2011 1:12:00 PM
welcome to poetrysoup, hope to be reading your poetry for a long time. by the looks of this first one you have written, looking forward to the next one. you do have a gift so keep posting. I agree with Carol, just write, there is an ideal every where you look, i walk my dog and come back with two or three ideals for a poem you can do it.
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Date: 7/7/2011 11:13:00 AM
When I welcomed you to PoetrySoup I hoped that you would continue your writing and share it with us. Today I am asking you to please continue your poetry writing. Just write what is in your heart as that is where the best poetry comes from. I will stop back soon and hope to be able to read some new poetry from you at that time Alice. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:43:00 AM
Lovely expressions on the feelings of love, Alice
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Alice Duncan
Date: 6/28/2011 3:38:00 PM
Thanks, Dr. Mehta. My first poem ever, for my wonderful husband. Thanks again to you and Carol.
Date: 6/28/2011 4:30:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Alice. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Alice Duncan
Date: 6/28/2011 3:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words.

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