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To My Future Self

Edward, remember this.
            Just like you were a caterpillar
            Before you became a butterfly;
     A bud before you blossomed one spring,
       You'll continue to evolve and flourish
                   In this vale of tears.
    You've got a lot of living to do, my friend.
    Life is what you make it! Embrace it fully!
        Make lemonade out of your lemons,
             Take time to smell the roses!

 Treasure quality time with friends and family.
     Celebrate even the smallest of victories.
          You're traveling through this life
     On the right trajectory; stay the course.
               Let nothing veer you off it!
       You're the sea captain of your destiny;
                  Sail on straight ahead!
         I needn't remind you just how cruel
        This life can be. As you're well aware,
         It isn't done knocking you down flat.

       You'll feel it's punch again and again,
        And you'll fall like timber each time,
         But you won't stay down, Edward.
   You'll get up, dust off, and carry on living!
            You woke up today, didn't you?
            You rose with the morning sun
           Grateful to be alive another day
             To see it set over the horizon.
      Yes sir, you'll rise again like the Phoenix
       Whenever life floors you with it's hook...

      And float along with hope in the clouds!
     Whenever the blue sky turns ashen gray
              And warm sunny days grow
       Unforgivingly cold; from bright to dark,
         Never lose faith, for you'll continue 
              To feel the presence of God
        At your darkest hours, I promise you.
     Keep on living life the best you know how!
    Keep on growing, personally and spiritually.
        May your future continue to be bright
         And gravid with infinite possibilities!


Letter To Your Future Self Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One
Date written: 09/19/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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October 17, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. I really enjoyed reading your heart felt letter, with a positive last stanza....
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October 17, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "To My Future Self" is a wonderful letter/write. Thanks for adding the picture with "best of luck." Enjoy your win with blessings....................
Theraven Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 11:40 PM
Edward, That's a fine write for unique person and poet. The best advice, the one we seek to find, and choose to follow. -Richard
Ibeh Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 1:58 AM
Thank you very much, Richard:-)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 3:12 PM
A great poem, Edward - you have said it all. "And float along with hope in the clouds! Whenever the blue sky turns ashen gray And warm sunny days grow Unforgivingly cold; from bright to dark" - beautifully touching lines. BW ~ Mala
Ibeh Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 4:51 PM
Thank you so much for the awesome feedback and visit, Mala:-)
Cunningham Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 11:37 AM
A well written letter to your future self Edward, full of positivity, seems like you're living life to the full never giving up. One of the best entries I've seen for this contest. Good luck. Tom
Ibeh Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 12:51 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Tom:-) Blessings, my friend.
Scragg Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Very profound and deep. A great entry.
Ibeh Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Thank you very much, Natasha:-)
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