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To Make Us Whole

Beyond the comprehension of but one segmented soul Lies the one intention of the source to make us whole Growing and all knowing for us al to be a part Each of us determines how we recognize its start How in the beginning if there was one to believe Wouldn’t we be grinning with that knowledge up our sleeve For some it’s God or Universe Intelligence for sure For some it’s not a rhyme or verse there’s nothing to explore For me, I keep open mind respecting others’ claims I just know I’m glad I’m here not worried by the names 1/25/23

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/3/2023 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations dear friend on your truly deserved POTD and apologise for my belated wishes, Hugs blessings, Jennifer

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/4/2023 5:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Jennifer!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/3/2023 12:06:00 PM

Hi Mike i had many questions, so at 44 years of age began my 1st degree and one of my majors was Biblical Studies - still with no real answers - I graduated but decided to do a B.A Hons degree now graduated wit Honors, butwas more Confused than ever. So I advocate that each unique individual believes as the choose to believe with their hearts and minds. I never presume i will reach those pearly gates,I can hope though, because we all sin every day in small ways. A stupendous poem Mike Kudos my friend B and H Jen.

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/4/2023 5:04:00 AM

One can never know I presume until this life has ended, I just try to be the best person I can be while on this earth! Happy Saturday!!

Deb M

Date: 1/28/2023 7:15:00 AM

An open mind and a positive attitude is a wonderful approach to this life we have been given….beautiful words Mike! Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/30/2023 10:44:00 AM

Thank you Deb xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/28/2023 6:03:00 AM

Very nice poem, showing your open mind and authenticity :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/30/2023 10:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi xxoo

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/28/2023 5:04:00 AM

You have nailed it Mike, keep an open mind, nihilism is an impossible state, otherwise we would never be here, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your thoughts on reality, pretty similar to my own, cheers David

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/28/2023 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much David, I appreciate your kind words !!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/26/2023 4:11:00 AM

You have a great outlook on life, Mike. The way it should be...awesome write!

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/26/2023 5:00:00 AM

Thank you Charlie !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 2:23:00 AM

Creative lines about whether there is a God of the universe and creator of all. Thank you for dropping by my page with congratulations. I appreciate you taking the time to do so. Sara

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/26/2023 5:02:00 AM

Thank you Sara !!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/26/2023 1:03:00 AM

Thought provoking verse Mike, will we ever know the mysteries of our great universe? Theories abound but as yet no real proof. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/26/2023 5:01:00 AM

Thanks Tom, I hope yours is as well!!