Deb Wilson Poet Rhyme

To Love In Weakness Or Grow Strong

In those tender hours before the dawn
I cry that I'm his tragic pawn.
He shreds my senses into tatters
then squashes all the hope that matters.

Yet I feel such a magical love
from him like he's sent from above.
My heartstrings play each song for him.
He fills my soul right to the brim.

Now I have made my tough decision.
He'll find me gone when he has risen.
Single and strong is what I'll be.
I grabbed the reins-set myself free!


written 1/16/2014
for contest Three or More Stanzas and Thoughts On Same Idea"

P>S> This is not my real life LOL !!

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Sheri Fresonke Harper January 18, 2014 at 3:10 PM Deb, excellent twist at the end and good emotion. Good contrast between the stanzas. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.

Carrie Richards January 18, 2014 at 12:06 PM Yahoo for you.........the voice of a strong woman, free to be you !!! Loved it....great entry and subject!!

Liam Mcdaid January 18, 2014 at 9:29 AM very beautifully penned eileen

Daver Austin January 18, 2014 at 8:12 AM Good for you, Deb. Ice the stud. daver

Shadow Hamilton January 18, 2014 at 4:34 AM lol Deb the tenderness seeps through you have a romantic heart love this Shadow x smile hug

Eelun Phetmoore January 17, 2014 at 9:41 PM I great poem about finding strength to do something you should but don't want to. I like the "P.S." So many people assume our poems are about us. Most of mine are made up situations.

Russell Sivey January 17, 2014 at 6:24 AM I really enjoyed reading this awesome write here this morning my friend! I especially liked the key line of the poem, "Single and strong is what I'll be." that line created the final blow to your poem, as 'you' completed your goal! What a fantastic piece, such a grand poem! Great Work!!