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To Love In Weakness Or Grow Strong

In those tender hours before the dawn I cry that I'm his tragic pawn. He shreds my senses into tatters then squashes all the hope that matters. Yet I feel such a magical love from him like he's sent from above. My heartstrings play each song for him. He fills my soul right to the brim. Now I have made my tough decision. He'll find me gone when he has risen. Single and strong is what I'll be. I grabbed the reins-set myself free! written 1/16/2014 for contest Three or More Stanzas and Thoughts On Same Idea" P>S> This is not my real life LOL !!

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Date: 1/18/2014 3:10:00 PM
Deb, excellent twist at the end and good emotion. Good contrast between the stanzas. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 1/18/2014 12:06:00 PM
Yahoo for you.........the voice of a strong woman, free to be you !!! Loved it....great entry and subject!!
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Date: 1/18/2014 9:29:00 AM
very beautifully penned eileen
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Date: 1/18/2014 8:12:00 AM
Good for you, Deb. Ice the stud. daver
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Date: 1/18/2014 4:34:00 AM
lol Deb the tenderness seeps through you have a romantic heart love this Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/17/2014 9:41:00 PM
I great poem about finding strength to do something you should but don't want to. I like the "P.S." So many people assume our poems are about us. Most of mine are made up situations.
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Date: 1/17/2014 6:24:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this awesome write here this morning my friend! I especially liked the key line of the poem, "Single and strong is what I'll be." that line created the final blow to your poem, as 'you' completed your goal! What a fantastic piece, such a grand poem! Great Work!!
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