To Live My Life Fully Free

No Constraints at all upon me
doing just what I would like
travel free with nothing to pay
wherever I go, always one to strike

Wouldn't it be just amazingly great
visit all my dear poetic friends
wherever in the world that they be
drop in unannounced as one sends

I would have my private jet
with my private pilot sent to go
get up one morning just decide
where that day I could put my toe

Surprise looks there I'd truly find
catch them on the hop without fail
U.S, South Africa, India, Canada, U.K
there my friends do reside, wag my tail

Well it's a nice thought to dream
to live my life fully free
this dream would be truly fab
drop in for coffee asking no fee

(This is written when thinking if I didn’t have any constraints in life, so I attempt to describe what life would look like.)
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Proxenos Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 9:25 AM
It would be wonderful - how great that could be meeting our wonderful poetic friends from each above country. let one of us win the lottery, imagine we could then meet each other, someone has to win, lets see. HUGS AND BLESSINGS JENNIFER.
Mcconnell Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Thanks again Jennifer, Glad you liked the idea of us all meeting up but I won't win the lottery as I don't do it! Take care with hugs and blessings,Gordon
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 5:03 PM
Gordon, this would be my wish too - to be completely free, no cares in the world! You have beautifully expressed your thoughts with your brilliant pen. BW ~ Mala
Mcconnell Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Mala, Glad you enjoyed this piece and pleased our wishes would be mutual. Blessings,Gordon
Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 12:35 AM
That would be amazing Gordon, but let me know so I could get something in lol. Hope your weekend is going well, off to Weston for the day, need a break from the kitchen. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 1:31 AM
Just beyond Bristol on the m5.
Mcconnell Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 12:49 AM
Thanks Tom, Hope you have a nice day at Weston, where is it? Take care, Gordon
Y. Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 12:59 PM
WoW! Gordon, That would be so awesome! I really enjoyed the “ free” tone and vibe of this poem Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
Mcconnell Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Thanks Alexis, Glad this Wowed you and indeed it would be awesome but we can only dream! Hope its a wonderful day with you, its late evening and very dark here. Blessings, Gordon
Pandit Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 10:17 AM
That would be so wonderful. Enjoyed the essence of your poem, Gordon.
Mcconnell Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Thanks Vijay, Glad you enjoyed this one and trust you're having a lovely weekend, blessings,Gordon
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