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To Let Go By Anna Lo P

Why can't it be US? Why does it have to be US? We only wanted one's happiness We just wanted love & belongingness. Time & place, put us in regress Worlds apart is our test, Of life and love, so willing to offer Because we are different, it is US who suffer. I want to confess all the love I can give Myself, my all, more than you can receive You want to confess a life you can't share Your life and self, you think is in despair. Now, we are both in vain and agony We are doomed in this love & fantasy How to part ways without US being hurt & lost The price of love & happiness we pay with so much cost. Is it time to let go and bid farewell? Wishing at the end, that we'll both be well Is it time for us to say our hurtful goodbyes? Last kiss, last hug, end it only with but a sigh. I don't want to listen to the drops of rain Each drop is our weeping, that will cause me pain, I don't want to let go, I will stay even for a while Because it's just too hard to say the last goodbye....

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Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/17/2012 9:27:00 PM

so deep....so emotional..can relate to your poem friend Anna...whew!! thanks for sharing and have a blessed day always! :)

Anna Lo
Date: 10/18/2012 5:52:00 AM

..emotional rather..wrongly typed.. :)

Anna Lo
Date: 10/18/2012 5:51:00 AM

A Blessed evening Ms. Maria Paz, yes it was not only emotion & so deep, but it's like my soul has been put set into fire,, a soul not even possible to be felt but I have felt like it died...That was outrightly done that's is why it's entitled "Tonight".. Anyways, Im not yet done reading your numerous works & truly Im being inspired by them..Goodluck to us all & thanks. Have a nice day to you my Pen Friend..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/15/2012 6:00:00 AM

A very touching poem Anna, but very well performed. - Have a lovely new week! - oxox Anne-Lise :)

Anna Lo
Date: 10/15/2012 9:07:00 AM

Hello Ms. Anne, i hope I never fail to create simple but true-to-heart poems.. Thanks again Mam for reading & patronizing.. I wish to be a pro like you & the rest..:) Enjoy too!..

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 10/15/2012 12:34:00 AM

so sad..very heartfelt write..wishing you have a fabulous day my dearest friend...luv, SK

Anna Lo
Date: 10/15/2012 12:52:00 AM

Thank you Ms. Sukmawati.. yes, that was well written from this lamenting heart..a Love story known only by our hearts..I hope the next time i write, it will be inspired by our happiness because I have hopes because of the love in me..wishing you too the best of our lives..