Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

To Hold

Untruths a whisper
Fallen from your lips
Save for another
will forgive your slips
But I truth teller 
cannot forgive with ease
A day will come when you 
need a hand to squeeze
Be gone with your hooded lies
The darkness within your soul
For I hold only lightness 
And will till I grow old
One day you will find yourself 
All alone in a world so cold
You'll find that all your lies got
Was fakness which to hold

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Freddie Robinson Jr. November 9, 2019 at 10:43 AM Real truth spoken bold, Brenda! You ink slam w/such feminine power. Another mighty fine piece of poetry. Love and joy forever. Brenda Chiri November 9, 2019 at 4:09 PM Thank you so much Freddie love your comments!;)

John Fleming October 31, 2019 at 10:14 AM Rather bleak...but pretty powerful stuff all the same, Brenda -- and a resounding finale! In fondness. :) john P.s I hope you are feeling much better! Brenda Chiri October 31, 2019 at 12:10 PM Well lies usually are John but some people that is all they seem to do! So I leave it to their next victim lol and there is one within their site lmao! Thank you so much John!;)

Paul Callus October 30, 2019 at 2:53 PM Lies are short-lived, Brenda, especially if they keep coming in quick succession. Ugh...best to part ways; there are many more fish in the sea lol. Regards // paul Brenda Chiri October 31, 2019 at 12:08 PM Thank you Paul I do enjoy your comments!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script October 30, 2019 at 6:53 AM How can you rid someone you’re married to...hahaha.Jk From sickness to death is actually how. But you nailed this one. I’m loving your artistic pen. Brenda Chiri October 31, 2019 at 12:07 PM Hahaha I guess divorce is the only hope there! Haha! Thank you!;)

Gordon Mcconnell October 29, 2019 at 4:41 PM A great write Brenda, indeed bringing out such a great truth that a liar will be caught out in the end. Blessings always, Gordon Brenda Chiri October 31, 2019 at 12:06 PM Gordon thank you so much!;)

Ts Poetry October 29, 2019 at 7:11 AM We need to rid our lives of those Brenda Chiri October 31, 2019 at 12:06 PM Yes we do! Thank you T!;)

Regina Mcintosh October 29, 2019 at 3:53 AM So true... Liars are very hard to understand. Not that I'm perfect by any means but don't trust a liar. Love this - Bless you, Gina Brenda Chiri October 29, 2019 at 9:35 AM Thank you Regina so very much!;)