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''To Hell and Back''

Oh' you scared,persecuted square. Dante melts my suffering skin. Darkness falls in limbo as a curse to me. I'm a gluttonous fraud. Spitting in tune they say-''We spare not the tears of weakness.'' Rage fuels the hatred,as twas my acute demise. Anoint thy soul heavenly father. I was once tired. Now given the gift of imminent strength. Blessed by a prominent light. I've surrendered my body. Feel no pain,agony escapes me. PD~Poet Destroyer contest~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/4/2012 5:43:00 PM
THANKS TO ALL WHO LIKED THIS POEM....I truly enjoyed writing another poem in PDS' contest~Live everyday INSPIRED!!love~
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Date: 8/9/2012 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Kacey. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:22:00 PM
kacey congrats on your win, love it...David
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:36:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win Kacey
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Date: 8/4/2012 8:32:00 PM
KACEY :-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD
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Date: 7/24/2012 7:08:00 PM
Hi Kacey, it is a very nice feeling to have you stop by and visit my poems... Thank you... about your poem~ you hit the nail on the head with your entry.. the systematic mistreated image is what I'm looking for... and the escape is even better... i love your entry... LOL...maybe i should have waited to peek..... stopping by to say hi & good night... xox~PD
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:44:00 PM
A well written poem for this contest Kacey, and I will say a win poem !!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/24/2012 7:51:00 AM
Kacey,...You traveled to hell and then back to heaven in this entry...Appreciated the interjection of Dante melting your suffering skin and then the call for the God's anointing on the second half...Nice reversal of tho't! If you have other Christian poetry that you would like to share with me, please let me know...It is a great way to meditate...gwendolen
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