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To Have and To Hold

you are the rigid lines of a spine unseen you are my bonsai woman you are my broken queen the instep of a dancer inclined impossibly you are Venus famished with flies beneath her feet you are the victor, her valor, the sword deep in her chest you are my iron maiden and I shall have no rest not until you are mine plus mine are we do I take you to be lawfully wed to me

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Date: 3/9/2011 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Julia. Love Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations Julia on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:45:00 AM
Hi Julia, beautiful write! congrats on being featured... Lay
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Date: 11/23/2010 8:25:00 AM
Kind of Amer. beauty live in your verses... like a photo taken by wind catching the leaves in their dance
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Date: 11/23/2010 8:25:00 AM
Kind of Amer. beauty lives in your verses... like a photo taken by wind catching the leaves in their dance
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:57:00 PM
lovely write, enjoyed,..p.d.
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