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To Harness His Maiden's Love

His Lordship built an Ivory fence to harness all his maiden's love for his earnest desire to wear her was as an elegant fitting glove yet, no part of it did she yearn, so she stepped upon a rock and caused him sudden shock she looked at him; he looked her she closed her fist then gave him a sock then she leaned and gave him a shove for twas not with he,did she cherish the love! Copyright McCuen 2008

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Date: 11/9/2008 1:20:00 PM
This piece flows with such charm and grace. I also like the spark given to the piece from the rhyming pattern. It seems to me like the back and forth could either be serious or humor. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 11/8/2008 12:23:00 PM
I love the love play in this write, it's humorous while telling a story, thanks for all of your comments, take care D-nyce
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