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To Greedy You From Stupid Me

Greedy you Stupid me I'm running on empty I still give whats left of me to greedy you from stupid me Dip into the honey pot take the rest of what I got I'll still give the rest of me to greedy you from stupid me Just for the smile behind your eyes I would tear the moon out of the skies and give the very best of me to greedy you from stupid me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/25/2016 8:46:00 AM
Nice rhythm and use of repetition - helps to make your point. Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your 3rd place win! Jesse
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Date: 6/25/2016 4:30:00 PM
Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate that the most.

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