To Greedy You From Stupid Me

Greedy you

Stupid me

I'm running on

empty

I still give whats left of me

to greedy you

from stupid me

Dip into 

the honey pot

take the rest

of what I got

I'll still give the rest of me

to greedy you

from stupid me

Just for the smile

behind your eyes

I would tear the moon 

out of the skies

and give the very best of me

to greedy you

from stupid me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 25, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Nice rhythm and use of repetition - helps to make your point. Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your 3rd place win! Jesse
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June 25, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate that the most.
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