To Fly

I look up. My eyes squint in the bright glare of the sun's rays, and I feel pure elation as I watch my kite soar. Sadness dissipates, for now I am set free. 30/03/2023 Waltz Wave Sponsored by :Emile Pinet

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Amanda Carden

Date: 4/11/2023 3:53:00 AM

Lovely makes me feel warm.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/10/2023 3:36:00 PM

Very well expressed. I especially like how you merge kite freedom with that of your own self. Congratulations! Brian

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/1/2023 5:11:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.