to fish or not to fish

water ripples near 
bobber bounces in water
still no stinkin fish
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May 28, 2024 at 8:57 AM
Dear Karen, Your haiku perfectly captures the essence of the age-old fishing dilemma! The imagery of the bobber bouncing in the water shows anticipation and frustration, all wrapped up in just a few words. I can feel the anticipation building with each line. Keep reeling in those moments of everyday life with your poetry! - Blessings, Daniel
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May 28, 2024 at 4:03 PM
Thank you for your kind comment! Have a great day
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