To: fill in name my lucky Valentine

For Valentines Day Senryu Contest my heart longs for you words can’t express how I feel~ fill in blank your name

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/10/2025 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write you have here. Love the fill in the blank with a name. Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day............

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/10/2025 11:52:00 AM

Thank you and you as well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:08:00 PM

Very creative. Congrats, Oliver

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/10/2025 1:40:00 AM

Thanks much Andrea. I appreciate your comments

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/9/2025 12:59:00 PM

Oliver, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative senryu.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/9/2025 1:35:00 PM

Thank you Tania. It was an excellent contest. Oliver

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/3/2025 12:23:00 PM

Very unique, Oliver! I like the wry twist as the end and the implication that you could have more than one Valentine! It also could reflect the voice of God as the eternal, heavenly valentine waiting for us to fill in our name! Love the double meaning. Well done! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/3/2025 12:25:00 PM

Thanks Sam. That is the beauty of poetry. We can write and have many different interpretations. Blessings

Diane Christian

Date: 2/3/2025 7:58:00 AM

very nice

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/3/2025 11:01:00 AM

Thanks Diane