To Feel Your Pain

To feel your pain 
means sensing the endless and senseless energy drain

Moving forward doesn't happen with ease
sometimes it's more like a painful disease

or like a ride on a road full of spike strips
then comes the 10 car pileup and off the roof rips

Patience and clear vision with which to see
is of utmost importance.  It's true, it is the key

The key will unlock the door that secludes you
from a fulfilling life that will NOT elude you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/14/2010 9:46:00 AM
I am smiling because of all the wonderful poetry I am reading this morning. Thank you for sharing yours Kimberly and know that others will draw inspiration from it when they read it. Love, Carol
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