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To Eurydice

her steps rhyme with mine an echo between yearn and daunt I ask her to keep pace, her shadows pine voices behind me, slick and gaunt —the phantoms want to keep her the light ahead hazy, yet I demur we’re so close—or too close panic surged deliriously, in prose— my eyes turn to my asphodel... her lost shadow whispers: ‘farewell.’

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Date: 5/29/2025 9:19:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts and or memories. Angers fate
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 5/30/2025 6:53:00 PM
Thank you for your comment! The story of Eurydice and Orpheus is a tragedy that affected me profoundly when I was a child... I'm glad I'm able to put it into poetic words.

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