To Erase the Memory of You

To Erase The Memory Of You To erase the sunspots of the mind, The memories that are you, The dotted sunshine through the years, Enslaved in lover’s hue. To rid the body of all the pain And showers flooding through, Grey clouds that dissipated With your songs and rainbow view. To have lived a life having never known The warmth and deep connect, The nurture feigned for access, Prior to drought and harsh neglect. To forget the madness of the love And desire I felt so true Would be the agony and ecstasy In this garden made for two To forgive and not forget Is now all that will ensue, But I forgive myself for loving you For it wasn’t hard to do. 17th October 2019 Midnight Aurora

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Date: 1/11/2020 2:58:00 PM
I have fav this! Great write!
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Date: 11/25/2019 11:07:00 AM
Wonderful poem nicely rhymed. love phyl
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Date: 11/16/2019 4:17:00 PM
Hello midnight Auron, ah! you are in love. Have a nice evening my frken d.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/18/2019 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Barbara.
Date: 11/13/2019 9:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Midnight.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/18/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/8/2019 8:59:00 PM
The last stanza touches a cord for sure in many a heart. Wonderful!
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/18/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thanks, Barbara.
Date: 10/28/2019 12:11:00 PM
I agree the third stanza is the highlight of this poem for me. Absolutely fantastically written and relatable. My personal favourite I have came across to date on this site. Well done Aurora
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/28/2019 4:12:00 PM
Wow...Thank you Ben. Glad you could relate.
Date: 10/27/2019 10:22:00 AM
A beautiful, very touching write, the third stanza is heartbreaking. What great pain there is to have lived a life loving someone and thinking that you are loved but one day to find it was all just for your partner's convenience. Your last stanza is wonderful.
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Date: 10/27/2019 3:38:00 PM
Indeed. The older I get the more I see how cruel people are to each other. It takes a lot of effort to not become cynical about things. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 10/27/2019 4:02:00 AM
It is never easy to erase memories.. some last forever... well expressed..
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/27/2019 3:34:00 PM
They do unfortunately...thank you.
Date: 10/26/2019 6:15:00 AM
Back again to read your poems. I am in awe at your amazing talent! You should consider writing more.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/27/2019 3:32:00 PM
:)
Date: 10/22/2019 12:52:00 PM
Wonderfully written :-) x
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/24/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Elaine.
Date: 10/21/2019 8:14:00 AM
Now this is a love poem, for sure. That ending is amazing. 'But I forgive myself for loving you For it wasn’t hard to do.' I loved that, it spoke to me. Nicely done.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/24/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Chris.
Date: 10/20/2019 7:56:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, love the flow, and the sincerity.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/24/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, Harry.
Date: 10/20/2019 6:00:00 PM
I like this a lot . We’ve all been through this before . Plus your poet name is sooooo dope . I love It bunches
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/20/2019 6:08:00 PM
Lol...Thanks a lot Johnny.
Date: 10/20/2019 1:31:00 PM
Beautifully executed! I am in awe and intrigued by your ability to weave a love story into a gardening experience.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/20/2019 6:07:00 PM
It's bizarre...I don't even like gardening! Thank you Curtis.
Date: 10/20/2019 1:27:00 PM
I have a sudden desire to take up gardening. I enjoyed these passionate prose. Thanks for your comment on my latest piece.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/20/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read all of my poems. That's exceptionally nice of you and very appreciated :)
Date: 10/19/2019 4:26:00 PM
Memories of love at its best..a splendid write!
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/19/2019 5:24:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
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