To Edit

To Edit 
to recover 
to renew 
to rediscover 
to change the existing 
to realize my own mistakes 
to change the innocence
to redo the first words spoken 
can I fix the Broken ?
to Edit .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pen Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 8:36 AM
I like it. No, edit that. I love it
Rain Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 3:15 PM
You're sweet and Adorable ~ You have me at ."No, edit that "
Espinola Collins Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 8:36 PM
I really like that...great title too! Ana
Rain Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Thank-you very much , you inspire me with kindness !
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 6:59 PM
No thanks required Yvette, none at all. And absolutely, we can chat, I'd like that. MC
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July 18, 2014 at 10:06 PM
Cool Busy Lady!
Rain Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 3:17 PM
you know I still adore you my friend , will check soup mail soon, just a break from working 12 hr shifts !
Rain Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Our Brave poet in war ..I wishing you come home soon , Thank-you for protecting us ~
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Been here before, in poetry and in life. Kind of the same, it's said a poem is never really finished. I've edited poems after 20 years, life is the same way. Just when you think you've figure yourself out...you reinvent, you edit. This was very good, a lot in a few lines -Great Poem Yvette!!! MC
Rain Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 11:09 PM
Thank-you . I love this site , it allows me to express and read others , so much Talent. you yourself are quite amazing ~ I guess we have to pass on to be the noticed ? Just a litle Humor there my Friend , Lots to chat about , Yvette Thank-you for serving Our Country .
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