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To Be Told

Darkness fills the sky's.... Tears fill my eye's...... The way I appear,Dont take me by surprise....... My mouth speaks words that no others have spoken........ Please don't take me serious I'm just jocking..... My words are full of Lie's....... My mind is soon to die....... So when I tell you my words are true,please Dont believe them I'm constantly crying the blues....... My hands delt the shame....... My mother got the blame........ But one is whole and one is me...... An me is slowly dieing! Sunshine fills the sky's....... The glare of my beautiful brown eyes...... I will not dispice, what I recognize..... I am me and I will be me to the foolest......

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 2:38:00 PM

PS.. wow, it's already a featured poem :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 2:37:00 PM

Arick, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Arick Carles
Date: 5/2/2015 9:49:00 PM

Hi linda its nice meeting you as well i am new to poetrysoup and am really enjoying it but would like some advice on what i should do lol thanks and respond asap

Skat A

Date: 4/26/2015 12:59:00 AM

Hi Arick, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Arick Carles
Date: 5/2/2015 9:49:00 PM

Hello

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2015 11:13:00 PM

Arick, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@