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To Be Or Not To Be Human

A window of opportunity, arose on planet earth, Reality is revealed, human intelligence gives birth, Our mind opens possibilities, but questions coincide, Trying to find answers, demise we might just avoid. We search on a grand scale, yet also the minute, Build machines to crunch numbers, do you compute, Our weapons are terrifying, emulating the sun, Split atoms by fission, then in fusion become one. Most powerful race, known universe has ever seen, Cannot be stopped replicating our own dreams, Fairytales and fantasy, are no longer out of reach, Genius; the ability to move mountains, not a niche. Ok stop throwing bouquets, this all comes at a cost, My poem’s allegory, it’s about truth more than loss, I always try bring balance, but afraid not this time, We have redeeming qualities, some actually sublime. Our technology’s incredible, everything being said, In the near future, we’ll be cloning off our dead, I mean can’t you see, sky was never set as a limit, Cosmos; is our playground, not the overhead zenith. Show me one country, devoid of all corruption, Our human nature, causes hell and destruction, Without these innate traits, where would we be, I’ll give it to you straight, still swinging from trees. We are what we are, there’s simply no other way, Call me controversial, for this picture I portray, The device your looking at, that thing with a chip, Don’t be so naive, it was harvested by the whip. Sitting on our sofas, musing rainbows and clouds, Whilst this pretty world, is built behind a shroud, Not here condemning you, condoning to be exact, You earned the privilege, I’m simply stating facts. So like it or not, existentially we’re all complicit, Don’t care who you are, or what emotions I elicit, Unless in a cave, living off lichen and insects, Yabba Dabba Do! Mr Flintstone, pay my respects. By David Kavanagh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/22/2020 1:51:00 PM
So many fantastic points my mate. To air is to be humam Corruption is endemic We build machine's that make human labour redundant.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/22/2020 2:50:00 PM
Couldn't agree more David. We're already tgere aren't we they are currently builing or already have a Super Computer don't they that can pretty much think for itself. Its like the plot from Terminator and devoid of feelings or empathy im sure they would probably see us human's as a virus
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/22/2020 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Christopher honestly we’ve cast our own die, these machines are pretty damn smart, if they start thinking independently it’s curtains for us cheers David
Date: 9/21/2020 5:30:00 AM
God damn, David..! What a masterfully crafted look at society, disparity, craziness, development racing ahead of ethics. An absolutely insane poem... I very much admire the work gone into it, your dedication.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/21/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Sigrid I was doing some soul searching and found a lot of issues but the common denominator of our unsolvable problems is human intelligence we are victims of our own success but also clever enough to see the mistakes and hopefully someday a utopia can emerge for us all through our very own ingenuity, I really enjoyed writing this cheers David

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