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To Be Or Not To Be

FOOLHARDY
free
to
follow-
or deny
then to wonder why

               JEOPARDY
free
to
follow-
much to late
then,to wonder why

              ECSTASY
free
to
follow-
in rapture
then,with wonder cry

Inspired by John 8:33-36

faithlifefibonacci

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John Freeman

August 17, 2009 at 9:05 PM

Awesome message, in amazing form, Brian, Sincerely Moses

James Marshall Goff

August 17, 2009 at 5:14 PM

oh yes, I agree w/others! going into my favs!

James Marshall Goff

August 17, 2009 at 5:12 PM

I adore the method in which you seem to chant the human life lived...that results in the discovery of wonder & rapture! SO WELL DONE! Brian! and thanks, am humbled by your recognition of my poetry, james

Vernette Hutcherson

August 17, 2009 at 10:38 AM

Dear Brian, thank you for my place in your contest. Thank you also for all your support. God Bless. Vernette

Carrie Richards

August 17, 2009 at 10:35 AM

This one makes one pause and reflect. A poem to inspire, and strengthen one's faith. Wonderful form and inspiring words. ~ Love, Carrie Ps... Thank you once more Brian for supporting our poetry, and inspiring my writing with your contests.. I appreciate placing in your contest...and I when I'm stuck for a new idea...these contests give me direction! I applaud all of you who sponsor the contests!! Thanks so much!