To Be Free

Every broken beat of my pulsating heart that beats within, desires noting more than the
aspirations of sovereignty, the freedom to be amongst the stars could never outweigh the
freedom from one’s own soul.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/20/2025 5:09:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 1/28/2016 10:42:00 AM

Shane, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **