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To Arild

To Arild my brother across the sea.. You have my back and are the eyes when I can't see.. Oceans and sky's of time separate a friendship found in rhyme.. But a meer word joins the road we take where two hands reach out and shake.. You've given me trust but I still waiting for that long awaited cold beer and steak..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2012 4:33:00 PM

awesome tribute to Arild with lovely invitation to one day perhaps meet .. u two should do this one as a collab entry luv .. JG is tempted by that cold beer and steak ,,, but ... I so luv a friendship found in rhyme the best .. xoxo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/4/2012 10:30:00 AM

You two are made for each other you are both kind and caring and I have always appreciated your support xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/4/2012 9:10:00 AM

nice tribute to a far-off friend. i enjoyed this...

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/4/2012 8:18:00 AM

Wonderful dedication, Michael, you are indeed, a human being personified

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/4/2012 3:49:00 AM

Michael, no danger of jealousy. Arild is also a little sick of drinking soup every day, a proper dinner was hosted friendly - Oxox big warm hug to you from me :)Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 9/4/2012 1:27:00 AM

this is cool write..thanks for nice share Michael..enjoy it much:) luv SK

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2012 9:12:00 PM

ME LIKES. This is the kind of friendship poem I enjoy seeing.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/3/2012 7:44:00 PM

Michael, I'm glad I stopped by to read this awesome dedication to Arild. He is a great guy as are you! Nothing better than true friendships except for a little flirting...LOL...hugs, Rhonda

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/3/2012 8:14:00 PM

I knew you were a flirt too Rhonda lol. Hugs back to you. xxxx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/3/2012 5:59:00 PM

ah here's the poem! a nice dedication to a nice man :-) (have you read cindy cayton's dedication poem 'the men of poetrysoup'? I think you'll appreciate it...)

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/3/2012 6:06:00 PM

Yes I read it today and loved it!! Thanks hun xoxo

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/3/2012 4:46:00 PM

I remember flirting, before dating and way before marriage, children and hot flashes.

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/3/2012 5:06:00 PM

Lol Joan. I'm sure there is still flirting in your life. So here is some xoxo your way.

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/3/2012 4:09:00 PM

What a very nice dedication Michael

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/3/2012 5:48:00 PM

And a few for you too Francine. xoxo

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/3/2012 3:15:00 PM

Shame on you PD for turning this innocent gesture of friendship into something more lol. Wow I guess now I will have jealous wives n husbands sending me hate mail lol. Man , women, boy or girl, one look at Arild you have to hug him.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2012 3:04:00 PM

Awee..this is sweet and nice... I'm glad some folks hold friendship highly. Arlids... a lucky person to have Such a friend... for a minute there... after reading your blog. I thought I was gonna walk into a proposal in the sky...lol....I'm kidding .... you did say flirt and Arlid..on a blog. Than go check out my poem....I love it. .can't wait to see a real reunion between both you guys..luv..pd

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/3/2012 2:59:00 PM

Lovely tribute.....I hope you both get to meet some day....wonderful write!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/3/2012 2:30:00 PM

a wonderful dedication from one sensitive man to another.. arild will like this; the sponsor as well, michael. thanks for the honor of placing my piece in your recent contest.. :) huggs!

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/3/2012 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Nette, he is Gold.