To and Fro

inspiration
             makes its
               own pace
decides
             the form
rhythm
pause
               rhyme
               design
bubbles
from
                its spring
seemingly
inexhaustible
                       'til
                       suddenly
it
dries
                I stop..
                put down
my
pen..
              await
the rain
                    again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Lovely poem, Brian. It goes back and forth, just as the title, but there is another depthto the words.
Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Writing to the rhythm of the falling rain..Great one..Enjoyed...Sara
D. Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 8:59 AM
awesome. duke strand or should i say sir strand
Strand Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Thanks Nathan ,you are a true 'Barnabas'.Please see my comment my blog today re your other points!.Have a good day.Rgds Brian
Goff Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Brian....sometimes I feel such helplessness as a poet to impact anything....with my poetic drival....then I awake and try again....nice art! Jimbo
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