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To and Fro

inspiration
             makes its
               own pace
decides
             the form
rhythm
pause
               rhyme
               design
bubbles
from
                its spring
seemingly
inexhaustible
                       'til
                       suddenly
it
dries
                I stop..
                put down
my
pen..
              await
the rain
                    again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/6/2012 8:36:00 AM
Lovely poem, Brian. It goes back and forth, just as the title, but there is another depthto the words.
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Date: 7/5/2012 6:20:00 AM
Writing to the rhythm of the falling rain..Great one..Enjoyed...Sara
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:59:00 AM
awesome. duke strand or should i say sir strand
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Date: 7/2/2012 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Nathan ,you are a true 'Barnabas'.Please see my comment my blog today re your other points!.Have a good day.Rgds Brian
Date: 6/30/2012 7:46:00 PM
Brian....sometimes I feel such helplessness as a poet to impact anything....with my poetic drival....then I awake and try again....nice art! Jimbo
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