to an inspiring niece

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Poetic Form: Haiku

Inspired: 2024 August 04

Image: Stimulating Life

forty years transcend evaporates in a trice life suite an echo

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Karen Croft

Date: 8/7/2024 7:04:00 PM

Beautiful

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/7/2024 11:02:00 PM

That she was ... and still is. Aloha

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/5/2024 7:30:00 AM

A tribute to your niece. Well composed haiku.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/5/2024 7:48:00 AM

She was nine when our brother passed, besides her two older brothers and numerous cousins, leaves me as her last elder of the family. Her husband's Argentinian. Vaya con dios.