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To An Expecting Mother

Two perfect feet and too perfect hands My wish for you, ________ when the stork finally lands As sleep becomes scarce and the crying never ends Know that you are forever surrounded by friends You've got this and that, and the next thing too Because a fantastic loving mother is inside of you May smiles and coos overwhelming show That even your newborn will see this to be so Heart felt congratulations on this special gift Remember that always when soiled diapers are whiffed

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Anna Hopper

Date: 3/1/2023 3:06:00 PM

Oh I love it!!! I wrote one for a friend who was expecting, but it is no where near this amazing!!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/1/2023 9:04:00 PM

Anna your comments flatter me to no end! I find it very hard to believe that anything of yours was not amazing :) thank you very much for the sweet compliment. A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 3/1/2023 9:45:00 AM

This is so cute and clever. Loved it!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/1/2023 10:38:00 AM

Thank you very much ! I I am glad you enjoyed it. Smiles A.S.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2023 8:21:00 PM

Lovely write, as a mother & grandmother I know the feeling and smells.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/1/2023 5:04:00 AM

Thank you Eve! Both for the compliment and for being both :) Best Regards A.S.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/28/2023 6:42:00 AM

Your most sincere hopes are currently being squished between a bird and the aroma of dirty diapers, AS... how adorable!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/28/2023 2:50:00 PM

Thank you very much Sotto! I've been blessed by a good many of Muses as of late. Some of them may even be new friends that I've made here on Soup ;) A.S.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2023 7:38:00 PM

A stork and the whiff of diapers sandwich your well wishes…cute

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/27/2023 7:49:00 PM

This was written expressly for a new first time expecting mother that gives me critique on my poetry. The blank space is too conceal her name. Warmest regards A.S.