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To An Expecting Mother

Two perfect feet and too perfect hands
My wish for you, ________ when the stork finally lands
As sleep becomes scarce and the crying never ends
Know that you are forever surrounded by friends
You've got this and that, and the next thing too
Because a fantastic loving mother is inside of you
May smiles and coos overwhelming show
That even your newborn will see this to be so
Heart felt congratulations on this special gift
Remember that always when soiled diapers are whiffed

Copyright © Anonomus Scorpio | Year Posted 2023

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Anna Hopper Date: 3/1/2023 3:06:00 PM Oh I love it!!! I wrote one for a friend who was expecting, but it is no where near this amazing!! Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 3/1/2023 9:04:00 PM Anna your comments flatter me to no end! I find it very hard to believe that anything of yours was not amazing :) thank you very much for the sweet compliment. A.S.

Paige Hind Date: 3/1/2023 9:45:00 AM This is so cute and clever. Loved it! Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 3/1/2023 10:38:00 AM Thank you very much ! I I am glad you enjoyed it. Smiles A.S.

Eve Roper Date: 2/28/2023 8:21:00 PM Lovely write, as a mother & grandmother I know the feeling and smells. Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 3/1/2023 5:04:00 AM Thank you Eve! Both for the compliment and for being both :) Best Regards A.S.

Sotto Poet Date: 2/28/2023 6:42:00 AM Your most sincere hopes are currently being squished between a bird and the aroma of dirty diapers, AS... how adorable! Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 2/28/2023 2:50:00 PM Thank you very much Sotto! I've been blessed by a good many of Muses as of late. Some of them may even be new friends that I've made here on Soup ;) A.S.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/27/2023 7:38:00 PM A stork and the whiff of diapers sandwich your well wishes…cute Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 2/27/2023 7:49:00 PM This was written expressly for a new first time expecting mother that gives me critique on my poetry. The blank space is too conceal her name. Warmest regards A.S.