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To All Aspiring

The cold man,
the starving youth
walks the destroyed roads.
Through the fields of corpses
he scavenges the water
while wishing to fill
the withering cave inside.

The warm soul, 
the hiding one,
moving through the solemn life.
Denying those who taunt her
she lives a troubled life
and all she really wants it to
tell the world her story

This is to all aspiring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/30/2024 2:05:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:48:00 AM
Reese,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2011 12:56:00 AM
Like it Reese, nice read mate, nathan
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