To Age-To Live

To God pray to live

Wish granted, old we become

Grumbling never ends!




© Demetrios Trifiatis
     24  August 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 5:03 PM
You told me to see this one, and guess what? I had already seen it!!! haha I LIKES it.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 6:12 PM
No, I told you to see, "My Age and I" ha-ha! Happy Birthday! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 1:02 PM
- Dear friend Demetrios, I know an old oak tree..... it should be about nine hundred years .... but neither the size or age prevents it impel new leaves every year :) - Well done !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Ha ha, aging is not for the weak of heart.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:20 AM
God give as a gift: To live under the condition we get old. The majority of us accept the first and complain for the second. What will happen though if God observing our reluctance withholds his gift of living? Thank you my friend for taking the time to visit and comment!
Onclaud Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 12:29 AM
with age comes wisdom and grumbling... a beauty of a piece, D!.. huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 2:20 AM
Enjoy receiving your comments dear, Net! Thank you! Fortunately you young therefore no...crumbling! Ha - ha!
Muideen Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 3:56 PM
A well and a beautiful write, your write is true and it regulate upon everyone. Wise write..........A.M.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 12:25 AM
A.M., my good friend, thank you for your generous words.
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 3:27 PM
haha. So true for many people!!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 12:24 AM
Yes, dear Andrea, for most of the people. Thank you for your lovely visit.
Smith Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 1:42 PM
We are never satisfied.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 1:50 PM
You are right my friend , Tim. Thank you!
Nunez Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 7:20 AM
hahah...that's the nature of man...never satisfied...good one sire! hugs!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment my dearest friend, Kim.
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 4:23 AM
Wise words Demetrios - this made me smile:-) hugs jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:06 AM
Thank you my dearest, Jan. You so gentle and kind. Look at Mailsoup!
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