To a True Canuck

is that all you got
dis located
francais
lover

your comment was
quite correct my
not so froggie
not friend

i'm not a bully
i'm god of
what you
call

a sandbox 
but it's not
Richard
it's a

cat's meow
of a litter
box and
i'm top

dog
and
you're
a piece

of
shh
...it lol
......Dick
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Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 8:27 AM
This is all making my head spin, I can’t keep up *lol*
Connelly Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Lol you were supposed to have read this first then the Richard retort poem which you read first lol. This was a poem based on your comment of the poem i think I titled "punctual punctuating". I do hope you got a big laugh Richard. I'm sure others are thinking "what a bastard", and have banned reading me lol.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:35 PM
Merde! C'est qui ca? ;D,
Connelly Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Merde, c'est qui. (A true side note, but at university my American Lit and American poetry professor's name was Richard Slick, but he insisted on people addressing him as Dick Slick lol totally true, and you could watch the uncomfortablness in people when they talked with him. But I loved going to his office after hours and talking with him. Always a greeting of hey Jeff-hey Dick lol.
Connelly Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:44 PM
I responded as soon as I saw your comment, just now, well seconds ago turning into minutes; so I need to respond Maureen. Poetry soup poet Richard Lemoureux commented on a bunch of my stuff; so I wrote two poems as a thankful comment to his comments. This poem was the first and then I believe I titled the second "a possible Richard reply" or something like that. But he read the second first and responded. I don't know if he read the other, which was truly inspired by his psychoanalytical comment to another poem lol.
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