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To a Slug

Your pace of life is just sublime
When blessed with seasons, wet and warm
With foliage and fungi, you mark your time
A gastropod; a handsome form
As your journey is marked with a trail of slime
I wish you well, as you perform

O slink away from the hearty hedgehog
Spread word of your foes with silent talks
Avoid beer traps, salt piles, the brazen frog
And gardeners with their rakes and forks
I know every journey's a slow footslog
So, use well those tentacles and fine eye stalks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dutta Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Interesting Example! Let me try.
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 10:06 AM
I LOVE This, DAvid. What an awesome example for us!!!! A slug. So clever!!
Lindsay Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Thanks very much :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Great example for your contest. A fun read, with so many excellent lines. I'll save it in my favs, may I tweet a link?
Lindsay Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Thanks, and by all means (yes please!) :)
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