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To a Slug

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Your pace of life is just sublime When blessed with seasons, wet and warm With foliage and fungi, you mark your time A gastropod; a handsome form As your journey is marked with a trail of slime I wish you well, as you perform O slink away from the hearty hedgehog Spread word of your foes with silent talks Avoid beer traps, salt piles, the brazen frog And gardeners with their rakes and forks I know every journey's a slow footslog So, use well those tentacles and fine eye stalks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/15/2016 5:26:00 PM
Interesting Example! Let me try.
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Date: 7/14/2016 10:06:00 AM
I LOVE This, DAvid. What an awesome example for us!!!! A slug. So clever!!
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David Lindsay
Date: 7/14/2016 10:33:00 AM
Thanks very much :)
Date: 7/14/2016 9:09:00 AM
Great example for your contest. A fun read, with so many excellent lines. I'll save it in my favs, may I tweet a link?
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David Lindsay
Date: 7/14/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thanks, and by all means (yes please!) :)

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