The rhyme scheme of this kyrielle has been modified slightly...
Won't look a stranger in the eye She never ever would say Hi Security is tight at home Ten hidden cameras eyes do roam Afraid to let her children play Outside where they might go astray Inside she fears the internet Where bullies are a constant threat She prays that school is really safe She's heard the shots; she's read of rape And once it's dark, she draws the shades She's terrified when night invades ******** To rural village she has fled No more suburban life to dread Iambic Tetrameter
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