To a Platypus

My dear Ornithorhynchus,
Why do you confuse us?
Neither mammal nor bird
You are a creature absurd.

You are a mammal they say
Yet yellow yolked eggs you lay
And suckle your young
To scale evolution's rung.

Your pelt is so fine
But you root like the swine
In the mud for your fill
With your famous duck-bill!

Your cousins are echidnas
But you've webs on your claws
Of the Order Monotreme
You are an exceptional extreme.

Oh, dear Platypus
You are really thus
A freak of Biology
Of really rare ontology!

~19 Jul 2016~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/25/2016 7:49:00 AM
I like it, congratulations.
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Karam Misra
Date: 7/25/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Richard.~karam~
Date: 7/24/2016 6:36:00 PM
Like your Platypus poem, Karam. They are a puzzling animal! Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra
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Karam Misra
Date: 7/24/2016 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. ~karam~
Date: 7/23/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, Sunita. I was an ardent biology student at school myself and was introduced to the quaint platypus in Taxonomy. ~karam~
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/24/2016 12:56:00 AM
Seen images on web...weird thing...you rightly describe in your poem..poor creature...what a classification! :D Sunita
Date: 7/22/2016 11:27:00 PM
I'm curious to know more about this creature...studied biology at school and have to look for them, sure. Congrats on your win.:) Sunita
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Karam Misra
Date: 7/23/2016 6:17:00 AM
Thank you, Sunita. I was an ardent biology student at school myself and was introduced to the quaint platypus in Taxonomy. ~karam~
Date: 7/22/2016 10:25:00 PM
Well done Karam, congratulations...
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Date: 7/19/2016 2:52:00 AM
ohh, this is simply fabulous, karam.. i like this creature and your work!..huggs
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Karam Misra
Date: 7/19/2016 3:36:00 AM
Thank you, Nette. Was always fascinated by this odd creature from Oz. ~karam~
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