Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

T-Minus Ten

For understanding, I summon- beckon!
But, lo! The Time! It feels Infinite
Our lives could change in just a second
Or long be gone in just a minute...

'Tis only those who fear Hereafter
Who live a life of misery
Just fill your Mind with sounds of laughter-
And forever think of me!

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Vinayak Pratap September 25, 2013 at 10:01 PM evrythng which is born has to die 1 day thr is no use of fearing death its better to enjoy the time lord has given us rather than fearing the inevitable Just That Archaic Poet September 26, 2013 at 7:27 AM I agree with you, Vin. Thanks for taking time to read and review this piece; I very much appreciate it :)

Wayne Hill September 22, 2013 at 8:40 AM you have a sly sense of humor. Yes, we could all be gone in seconds, and there is no need to fear the next life. Just That Archaic Poet September 23, 2013 at 5:34 AM Thanks for the read and review, Wayne; I'm happy you agree with the sentiment and enjoy what humor I try to sporadically inject into my pieces. Thanks again! :)

Mustapha Mohammed September 18, 2013 at 5:30 AM Deep philosophical write Archaic that compliments an impeccable rhythm and rhyme. Just That Archaic Poet September 18, 2013 at 6:38 AM It's people like you who make me smile just about every single morning when I log in, Mustapha. Thank you for making my morning that much better :)