Titles In the Poem

Chaste this heart
Allied in the stars
Never to be apart
This love of ours

Softness and tenderness
Tomorrows live my soul
Oozing that sweet caress
Passion makes me whole

Love sleeps my breast
Oblivious to all around
Visions have come to rest
Inside a wholeness found
Nights are ever blessed
Granted wishes found

You and I in eternity
Oui you and I together
United in love forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 2:02 PM
Very passionate work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...You are very good with this topic in your works..Your presence at my blog lifted my spirits..People from all faiths, languages, cultures, and political preferences are asking for good for my child that blesses my soul..Thanks again. Sara
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December 28, 2010 at 8:18 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Happy New Year! Karen
Haick Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 5:19 PM
A beautiful poem Daniel! Love the line, "Allied in the stars". Wishing you a very happy New Year with blessings and happiness. Always, Audrey
Smalling Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 2:05 PM
And so let it be, happy new year, my friend. May love come for you with all the grace of your poem.
Mehta Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 4:04 AM
Very passionate thoughts on love, Daniel
M V Avatar
December 24, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Very deep and passionate love bond,Daniel.Beautifully written
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December 24, 2010 at 6:03 PM
Nice and deep Daniel,, ooo i love the thought of granted wishes found,.p.d.
Smith Avatar
December 24, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Wonderful as always Daniel... Enjoyed this one... Think I'll add it to my favorites.. Take care.. Dana'lynn
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