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. Hell's perpetual fires burn- Heaven's unending bliss renew

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/11/2010 12:56:00 PM

Glad you like "That Girl":) I'm ok, I guess...just that "Time" stresses me out sometimes...hugs, Jimmy

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/4/2010 5:05:00 PM

Cool! I like this one alot Mitch!-Robert

Rachel W

Date: 5/4/2010 2:52:00 PM

Great contrast in such few words, Mitch!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/3/2010 6:21:00 PM

Hey Mitch, Very nice Monoku! Good luck in the contest, Bro...later, Jimmy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/3/2010 8:45:00 AM

Excellent monoku, Mitch! Just saw the movie 2012 and this made me think of the "renewal" and hope that come at the end. Also, Soup mail returned. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 6:45:00 AM

great write in this monoku...contrasting subjects.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/3/2010 2:47:00 AM

very interesting monoku, Mitch :) wish you all the best in the contest! :)

Rick Parise

Date: 5/2/2010 7:46:00 PM

Enjoyed this one~A 1st place WINNER!!Nice job!~~Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 7:19:00 PM

good luck in the contest, well said the wrath and goodness, enjoyed the Monoku,..p..d

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2010 6:13:00 PM

Nice expressions- Best in the contest

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2010 6:11:00 PM

WELL DONE MITCH, LOVE THE CONCEPT YES IT LOOKS LIKE A STING FOR SOME.. THAN ON THE OTHER HAND IT LOOKS REFRESHING,,IRMA