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                    Hell's perpetual fires burn-

                                                          Heaven's unending bliss renew
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Anderson Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Glad you like "That Girl":) I'm ok, I guess...just that "Time" stresses me out sometimes...hugs, Jimmy
Dufresne Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Cool! I like this one alot Mitch!-Robert
W Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 2:52 PM
Great contrast in such few words, Mitch!
Anderson Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Hey Mitch, Very nice Monoku! Good luck in the contest, Bro...later, Jimmy
Devonshire Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 8:45 AM
Excellent monoku, Mitch! Just saw the movie 2012 and this made me think of the "renewal" and hope that come at the end. Also, Soup mail returned. Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 6:45 AM
great write in this monoku...contrasting subjects.
K. Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 2:47 AM
very interesting monoku, Mitch :) wish you all the best in the contest! :)
A   Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 7:19 PM
good luck in the contest, well said the wrath and goodness, enjoyed the Monoku,..p..d
Mehta Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Nice expressions- Best in the contest
A  Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 6:11 PM
WELL DONE MITCH, LOVE THE CONCEPT YES IT LOOKS LIKE A STING FOR SOME.. THAN ON THE OTHER HAND IT LOOKS REFRESHING,,IRMA
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