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A thin rope between life and death
                              
                                               A pop of a string can determine your fate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 9:44 PM
this one was very insightful. If it was for a contest, a shame you didn't place!
Anderson Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Hey Faleshia, Thnx for leaving comments on my writes...always appreciated....Jimmy
Haick Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 1:01 PM
Words of wisdom, Faleshia...life is very fragile...how God must marvel and shake his head when we're puffed up! Thanks for the kind comments, always...Love, Audrey
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May 2, 2010 at 8:20 PM
YES BETWEEN OUR DESTINY AND FATE, I WONDER WHO DECIDES WHEN OUR STRING IS CUT, LOVE IT FALESHIA, GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST,,IRMA
Nunn Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 5:31 PM
A very good write of how much time any of us have, good write...thanks on Sheep,,glad that you liked it..Danny
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 7:42 PM
Good luck in the contest. Nice expressions
Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 2:22 PM
Great write that reminds us that any day could be the day no matter what the age of the person...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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May 1, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Wow! So much depth for the reader to ponder about. Great analogy. Best wishes in the contest! Keep up the good writing. Karen
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