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"title42"

in the midst of life-  
                             man mistakes devour lunches


For: Broken Monoku
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

Copyright © John Freeman | Year Posted 2010

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May 19, 2010 at 5:33 PM

ok...not at all sure? Light & Love always SOUP MAIL

May 5, 2010 at 9:21 AM

As usual, JohnMoses, profound! Good luck in the contest, but doubt if you'll need this wish..a winner, definitely...Peace, love, Audrey..P.S. Thanks for commenting on my win..

Carolyn Devonshire

May 3, 2010 at 7:24 PM

VERY intriguing, John! Wishing you success in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn

May 3, 2010 at 6:35 PM

Hey John, Thnx for always leaving comments on my writes..always appreciate this..Jimmy

Charmaine Chircop

May 3, 2010 at 1:57 PM

great great Monoku..hehe:)tnks for your kind wishes on my birthday..Charma

Poet Destroyer A

May 2, 2010 at 8:31 PM

all the Monoku i read to day are all awesome, good luck in the contest,..p.d.

May 1, 2010 at 6:11 PM

A fine monoku. Good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 1, 2010 at 4:41 PM

Forgot to mention I just posted a new blog...think u might like..luv again..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 1, 2010 at 4:39 PM

OH WOW an excellent entry ..good luck to u in Brian's contest... this is another fun one... happy weekend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

May 1, 2010 at 4:15 PM

Interesting. Good luck in the contest.

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