Titanic Mistake

TITANIC MISTAKE

Vernal
Journal

Large ship
Fast clip

Night chill
Might spill

Rolled dice
Hit ice

Star winks
Boat sinks

Kim Rodrigues (c) 2016
(Footle Poetry)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:11 PM
these are all cute and very nicely rhymed!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 1:35 PM
oh wow Kim I see you are inspired to write more footles!!! I just love the form once I start I can't stop. I can't wait to judge the contest - having one specific title stops me from peeking ... but its so tempting!:-) hugs Jan xx7
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thanks, Jan :):)
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