Titanic

Great stature, 
enormous strength; 
huge, colossal
the way my heart exploded 
so many different ways to express it
Does anyone hear the sound a heart 
Makes when it breaks
Even continents away
Did she hear it?
The only one that mattered
It seemed like four days ago
We were so in love 
Frolicking in the opulence,
Luxury of our acquaintance
Our love compared to the strength of the greek gods
Basking in the afterglow,
Proposing a toast,
With reason to believe it will not collapse
Without knowing our pride would lead to our demise.
And leave us cold, destitute, shocked beyond our mortal
Comprehension
Sobering to the thought this is the end
And the heat we once shared can’t take this chill away
Blistering,
I had to leave my body as the frost was setting in. . . 
In                      d i s b e l i e f
This is just a tip of the iceberg
How could “us” the greatest love story
Go down in history as a shame
Will we be known as the world's greatest love tragedy?
Sinking down to the oceans living room
Look at me soaking in all my tears of sorrow
Cubit measurements of the ocean amounting 
To the number of shed tears
Poisedon, nowhere to be found
Must have won the fight with the Titans
Was I the Titan,
And you Poisedon
Was our love destined to fail before it started
Who is to blame
This seems like a case for a wrongful death suit
Never to regain
Nor to recover
Just a titanic mockery
Be forewarned before you sign on
It may look good,
But we didn’t see what was lurking underneath
So much planning for our debut
A year in the making
Big lights
Cameras, the fame
So much for what we thought we knew 
Versus
What we didn’t see coming!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/4/2010 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 11/29/2010 6:36:00 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here Tarvarus. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2010 7:09:00 AM
Congrates on your poem being featured this week thoroughly enjoyed the read love Jayne
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Tavarus. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:19:00 PM
Congrats Tavarus on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a brilliant piece to share with us all my friend... enjoyed.. again..
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:01:00 AM
Powerful scribe!
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:19:00 PM
Hope u are OK Tavarus and are being inspired to write your creative poetry .. looking forward to reading .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 7/6/2010 10:53:00 PM
Thanks Linda will do.
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Date: 7/5/2010 9:10:00 PM
STUPENDOUS and SPECTACULAR.. Tavarus.. u need to put this one in a contest posted.. find one please.. also are u going to tackle the Luna contest.. u would be excellent at the personification form... your blog was great today also.. clarify if I am to add anything to my entry via soup mail please.. must get some rest.. how many nights without sleep ?? who sleeps in Hawaii?? with luv .."Sweetheart"
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Date: 7/5/2010 5:43:00 PM
great job, enjoyed reading today!
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