Titanic

Great stature, 
enormous strength; 
huge, colossal
the way my heart exploded 
so many different ways to express it
Does anyone hear the sound a heart 
Makes when it breaks
Even continents away
Did she hear it?
The only one that mattered
It seemed like four days ago
We were so in love 
Frolicking in the opulence,
Luxury of our acquaintance
Our love compared to the strength of the greek gods
Basking in the afterglow,
Proposing a toast,
With reason to believe it will not collapse
Without knowing our pride would lead to our demise.
And leave us cold, destitute, shocked beyond our mortal
Comprehension
Sobering to the thought this is the end
And the heat we once shared can’t take this chill away
Blistering,
I had to leave my body as the frost was setting in. . . 
In                      d i s b e l i e f
This is just a tip of the iceberg
How could “us” the greatest love story
Go down in history as a shame
Will we be known as the world's greatest love tragedy?
Sinking down to the oceans living room
Look at me soaking in all my tears of sorrow
Cubit measurements of the ocean amounting 
To the number of shed tears
Poisedon, nowhere to be found
Must have won the fight with the Titans
Was I the Titan,
And you Poisedon
Was our love destined to fail before it started
Who is to blame
This seems like a case for a wrongful death suit
Never to regain
Nor to recover
Just a titanic mockery
Be forewarned before you sign on
It may look good,
But we didn’t see what was lurking underneath
So much planning for our debut
A year in the making
Big lights
Cameras, the fame
So much for what we thought we knew 
Versus
What we didn’t see coming!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Adeite Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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November 29, 2010 at 6:36 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here Tarvarus. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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August 30, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Congrates on your poem being featured this week thoroughly enjoyed the read love Jayne
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Tavarus. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Congrats Tavarus on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a brilliant piece to share with us all my friend... enjoyed.. again..
Bouza Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Powerful scribe!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 7:19 PM
Hope u are OK Tavarus and are being inspired to write your creative poetry .. looking forward to reading .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Moreland Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 10:53 PM
Thanks Linda will do.
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July 5, 2010 at 9:10 PM
STUPENDOUS and SPECTACULAR.. Tavarus.. u need to put this one in a contest posted.. find one please.. also are u going to tackle the Luna contest.. u would be excellent at the personification form... your blog was great today also.. clarify if I am to add anything to my entry via soup mail please.. must get some rest.. how many nights without sleep ?? who sleeps in Hawaii?? with luv .."Sweetheart"
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July 5, 2010 at 5:43 PM
great job, enjoyed reading today!
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