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Tis the Wicked, Who Rule This World

Looking into my father's eyes, a child, standing by her river side....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/12/2014 9:40:00 PM
Jeremy ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2014 4:59:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , jeremy
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Date: 3/28/2014 9:17:00 AM
Jeremy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/28/2014 9:07:00 AM
Good morning Jeremy, much wickedness in this world. I think this form is called Monoku. It's a one line haiku (in this case senryu) in a single horizontal line. Thank you for the lovely comment. always ~LINDA
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Date: 3/26/2014 6:47:00 PM
Looking forward to reading more of your work Jeremy and thanks for commenting on my poem. Jan x
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Date: 3/26/2014 1:32:00 PM
This is a great Monoku poem, a one clever liner... Jeremy, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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