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'tis Love

last night I heard the moon whisper in a hush so tender, “love… yes, ‘tis love- as we laid to surrender in a gentle moment of splendor. we sat and counted stars until there was no more existence to gaze upon (embraced in affection)- indulged in cosmos and saw the water treading upon venus with ease (bodies adjacent in warmth). I thought of how you loved me without condition, hands held without caution, only care and concern. the sun rose and replied to the moon, “love yes, ‘tis perpetual love-” and with promises of radiant yellow we shined into the morn glory, encompassed in dewdrops and the opening of white and tangerine lilies. for I am your undying ignited candle blazing on into the constellations we call home- "yes… ‘tis love, ‘tis love." August 18, 2018

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Date: 8/22/2018 3:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Lovely, romantic imagery.kcv
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/22/2018 11:31:00 AM
thank you sweet Susan! :)-luloo
Date: 8/20/2018 2:35:00 PM
Hello Laura, I felt like I was on a journey reading this poem.A beautiful poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/22/2018 11:31:00 AM
thank you sweet Darlene! :)-luloo
Date: 8/19/2018 4:15:00 PM
The magical way you wrap love and nature together makes this poem so special luloo. This beauty is going into my Faves! Congratulations on your podium win! : )
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/22/2018 11:31:00 AM
aww thank you dear Connie! :)-luloo
Date: 8/19/2018 10:41:00 AM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/22/2018 11:30:00 AM
thank you sweet Line! :)-luloo
Date: 8/18/2018 9:51:00 PM
This is beautiful romance that embraced me with its grace, feel, commitment soul-laced in skies infinity, etched with love and delivered with talent. A joy to read, Laura. Congrats on your placement. Love the poem. All the best ... CayCay
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/22/2018 11:30:00 AM
thank you lovely CayCay! Be blessed :)-luloo

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