Tiring Days

Painful hot season
Eyes face vase grace all burning
Buds bursting crimson
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April 15, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:32 PM
that last line is really cool. Buds bursting crimson!
Gupta Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Thanks for the cool comment.... Doesn't the bud open crimson?
Whatley Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Very relatable piece, Probir - great use of Haiku.
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