Tired Walk

very nice, this reminds me of some emotionally screwy times i have gone through. a while back i wrote a couple poems on this very theme. life is often a struggle. i relate to your original take on this issue.

very nice, this reminds me of some emotionally screwy times i have gone through. a while back i wrote a couple poems on this very theme. life is often a struggle. i relate to your original take on this issue.

good wise words and advice cory for all tired and weary luv.. awesome setup too..

nice,,, and deep... don't give up.... also let me know when you get my assignment,..p.d.

poetry assignment# Form: 25 line Ballad ~~ Category: Love, confusion, and natural disaster ~~ Title: *hearts ripped apart* .. ,,p.s. time is part of the grading as well. Also don't forget to use all 3 categories in your poem... thank you,..P.d.

Very powerful poem, it brings us with you.

this is deep.. life must go on, right Cory?

Been there with this fatigue..Understand fully..Great topic and presentation...Thanks for the comment on my work "The Nightmare"...Sara

Enjoyed..Been there with that fatigue myself..Very well expressed...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "The Nightmare"...Sara

Indeed, this is just how life feels sometimes, Cory. Keep holding on and allow your hope to emerge. That way you won't "fall through the cracks." Love, Carolyn