Tired of Waiting- Revised With Music

I'm so tired of being alone,
Talking on the telephone,
Biding time waiting on you.
What should I do?

If you'd just make up your mind.
Can't believe I've been so blind
I'm so tired of being alone,
Talking on the telephone.

(Instrumental)

REFRAIN:
Writing all my feelings down,
Shedding tears that make me drown,
But what good does it do,
Loving you,
So tired of waiting for you
Waiting just waiting for you.

You could make up your mind,
Can't believe I've been so blind,
So tired of waiting for you.

(Instrumental here)

I keep my feelings to myself,
Put my heart up on a shelf,
Spend my life wanting you
To want me too.

REFRAIN:
Writing all my feelings down,
Shedding tears that make me drown,
But what good does it do,
Waiting for you?
So tired of waiting for you,
Waiting just waiting for you.

REFRAIN:
Writing all my feelings down,
Shedding tears that make me drown,
So tired of waiting for you,

(Instrumental and fade)




Lyrics by:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Music by:  Mark Massey
Copyright:  June, 2007
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 29, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Oh this is so sad and the music really compliments it, Mark is very talented..
Duet Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Yeah, I'm not "waiting" any more though. And, yes, Mark is very talented and a pleasure to work with. Thanks for reading, Z. Carole
Allison Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 2:18 PM
oh wow Carole your talent of writing and Mark's magic with the music shines through:-) hugs Jan xx
Duet Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 1:54 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. Yes, Mark is amazing. Love his music. Carole
Daniel Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 8:23 AM
Amazing song with sadness that can be felt, Carole:) Mark's music has added to its beauty:) a 7:)
Duet Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 1:55 AM
Thank you, Jo. I love lyrics! And, yes, Mark is amazing.
Pett Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Absolutely wonderful poem Carole complimented by Marks musical talents makes this outstanding, really enjoyed this. :))
Parker Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 8:57 PM
You have written and Mark with his music turned this into a very sad but really nice piece of music..bravo to you both
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 6:08 PM
hey that would make a great song and you could be like another Carole whose last name was King!! Nicely done
Duet Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Well thank you, Andrea. I love Carole King. And, I'd love to write songs. It is a dream of mine.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 3:50 PM
I can relate this lyrical piece to one of my daughters right now who is going through this same scenario. An excellent write Carole! Hope you have a happy new year. : ) 7
Duet Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Hope you and your daughter have a "happier" new year too.
Nance Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 7:15 AM
oh a song many sing, the waiting, and waiting. I know how it feels and you capture it well. No more waiting. hugs.
Duet Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Thanks for reading, Casarah. Glad you liked it. And, yes, I know I'm not alone in that feeling.
Green Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 6:18 AM
This one spoke to me, well, I guess I should say it sung to me. This feeling is all too common it seems and you have expressed it beautifully in this song. I'd love to hear the melody to this. Sadly beautiful Carole.
Duet Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Thank you, Chris. I value your opinion. I'd like to create a tune for it too but I broke my keyboard. Anyway....thanks for reading.
Gupta Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 6:03 AM
wonderful ... a musically illiterate person like me too is inclined to hum some tune... very delightful ...
Duet Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 5:06 PM
So glad you liked it, Probir. Thanks.
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