Tired

So tired. cannot lift a foot. an eyelid, both came down. honey...rescue me save me from myself. I forgot that all is well.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/17/2024 12:48:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2016 1:13:00 PM

GREAT WRITE

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/16/2010 11:06:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Irene. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/16/2010 2:59:00 AM

Short but full of meaning, I enjoyed the ending "I forgot that all is well" sometimes we do forget and worry over nothing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit