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TIPTOEING

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the Christmas star moves, tiptoeing across the sky asks: what happens next
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Gauthier Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 2:51 PM
"what happens next" is such a loaded question ~ love it. Added to my FAVE's
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 4:00 PM
thanks for appreciating the depth of the ending question. I'm also grateful for your fave.... :-) hugs
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Ha, ha. That's why there are rehearsals. Even the stars need to prepare. ~ Bit-part-walk-on player
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 4:00 PM
good point. I suppose mother nature does need some practice every now and then :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 6:03 AM
How cute is this…perhaps, the star didn’t know the story yet but now proudly with buttons popping is history!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 5:10 PM
true, buttons popping is a great way to think of it all...thanks for v isiting, hugs, Sara
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