Tiny Peices

Tiny pieces falling
i could say that it means 
something to me
i feel you
you walk in my dreams 
ever-haunting 
my memories
one finger
one faint move
has got me lingering
all my life on you
and i could say that 
i am not impressed
and i could waste away
with the rest
maybe its not that bad
brains and blood 
all down your back
i sometimes
see those eyes
still subsiding
in the sky
ive given up 
in my life
on trying 
to leave 
to leave this behind
one last gasp
to leave this world
always wondering
what you could have been worth
no institution
could change my mind
i know the only solution
is to take my life


to be by your side
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 11:17 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. (Please check spelling of pieces in your title.)
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February 13, 2016 at 11:05 PM
jasmine, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Brown Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jasmine. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:48 PM
deep write, Enjoying this monday night reading, thank you for the read,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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