Tiny Candles

For every candle that I lit with care
Ten Hail Mary's were whispered in prayer
For each confession I was told to amend
I said all my Hail Mary's ending in Amen

If I was in the confessional without a sin
I would say honestly what a good boy I had been
Then I would still go light another candle and pray
The next time my dad came home, that he would stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 4:56 PM
Ahh, this is so touching a poem, Mitch. Very nice!! Luv, Andrea
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April 22, 2010 at 11:27 AM
The last line wrenches at the readers heart. You have captured the essence of the significance of the candles. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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April 22, 2010 at 7:23 AM
A very enjoyable read Mitch. Love, Carol
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April 21, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Agree with Carrie, the last line was right to the heart. I like the emotion it provokes. Well done Mitch.
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 7:56 AM
That last line was heart-breaking! Well done, Mitch! ~
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