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Tin Lullaby

Plunking sound of rain
On a tin roof, inviting
Nature’s lullaby

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Poet Destroyer A

March 10, 2013 at 11:20 AM

Good morning, DEBRA ;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA

Ann Roske

March 5, 2013 at 10:00 AM

contratulations on your feature - I love the sound of a tin roof... nicely penned

Daver Austin

March 4, 2013 at 2:44 PM

Haiku are not easy to write. This one, in my estimation, is superb. Congrats on the selection. daver

Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2012 at 11:26 PM

I love the way you invoked the sound of rain. A very nice haiku, Debra.

Matthew Anish

December 15, 2011 at 3:20 PM

Keep dry! Nice work! Peace & love Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

April 30, 2011 at 11:20 PM

Ooo! Now that's what I call medicine for my stress... I love it... p.d.

Matt Hunt

April 21, 2011 at 9:06 PM

Nothing better than the sound of rain on a tin roof:) It's nature's natural sleep remedy;)

Robert Johnson

April 20, 2011 at 1:26 PM

haiku's are fun. i'll have to try some. so much gets said with so few words. you made me wish i had a tin roof.

Desiree M

April 20, 2011 at 9:28 AM

Perfect haiku Debra!

Anne Rutherford

April 20, 2011 at 8:44 AM

Debra perfect haiku , also a wonderful sound ,rain on a tin roof.

Carmen A

April 20, 2011 at 7:46 AM

this was very good, love the wording :)

James Foulk

April 19, 2011 at 5:54 PM

i love to read Haikus this one was a great read, enjoyed.

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