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Tin Lullaby

Plunking sound of rain On a tin roof, inviting Nature’s lullaby

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Date: 3/10/2013 11:20:00 AM

Good morning, DEBRA ;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA

Date: 3/5/2013 10:00:00 AM

contratulations on your feature - I love the sound of a tin roof... nicely penned

Date: 3/4/2013 2:44:00 PM

Haiku are not easy to write. This one, in my estimation, is superb. Congrats on the selection. daver

Date: 1/4/2012 11:26:00 PM

I love the way you invoked the sound of rain. A very nice haiku, Debra.

Date: 12/15/2011 3:20:00 PM

Keep dry! Nice work! Peace & love Matthew Anish

Date: 4/30/2011 11:20:00 PM

Ooo! Now that's what I call medicine for my stress... I love it... p.d.

Date: 4/21/2011 9:06:00 PM

Nothing better than the sound of rain on a tin roof:) It's nature's natural sleep remedy;)

Date: 4/20/2011 1:26:00 PM

haiku's are fun. i'll have to try some. so much gets said with so few words. you made me wish i had a tin roof.

Date: 4/20/2011 9:28:00 AM

Perfect haiku Debra!

Date: 4/20/2011 8:44:00 AM

Debra perfect haiku , also a wonderful sound ,rain on a tin roof.

Date: 4/20/2011 7:46:00 AM

this was very good, love the wording :)

Date: 4/19/2011 5:54:00 PM

i love to read Haikus this one was a great read, enjoyed.