Time's Up

time slips through
your fingers like
grains of sand

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Dawn Kilby

Date: 10/23/2008 8:33:00 AM

is'nt that the truth. it goes way too fast these days.

Adell Foster

Date: 10/6/2008 6:22:00 AM

D-nyce the words of this haiku ring so very true, time stands still for no man, woman or child...So we had beter make good use of the time that we have. Thank you for sharing these pearls of wisdom :-) God's Love, Always, Adell

Heidie Buys

Date: 10/3/2008 3:30:00 PM

Such an intrinsic truth in this poem. Well done. Love Heidie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/3/2008 2:55:00 PM

Time is leaving me so quickly..never enough time to get it all done.

James Foulk

Date: 10/3/2008 2:11:00 PM

I agree time goes by so fast and leaves our head spinning. a great write.

Michael Torres

Date: 10/2/2008 11:58:00 PM

Like I said to Janice poem on time, live each day like it was your last. Nice write Deneen so few words so effective. blessings Michael

Brian Strand

Date: 10/2/2008 11:50:00 PM

Never to return D-nyce.Nice work & thanks for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian

Sue Mason

Date: 10/2/2008 7:12:00 PM

Just like an hour glass ... smile ... great use of Haiku here Deneen. Some times the simplest form says the most!

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/2/2008 6:03:00 PM

The funny thing about time is I spent most of my life waiting on a parole date as it ticked by so slow and now I look back and it just flew right by - Great poem Deneen - God Bless

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/2/2008 3:59:00 PM

No doubt about it. Time is so fleeting. Enjoy every moment while we can. Another great title, too! Love, Shar

Farah Chamma

Date: 10/2/2008 3:07:00 PM

Yes indeed...It is very true and well-known...Times plays between our fingers...and all is ephemeral, except Value:) Thank you for sharing, TYOne, Farah

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